What think you of a 'star' poem?

Question

Stars. What laughter Universal

Attended before Earth

Opened hands, set molten iron

Air bubbling...

Stars. What fanged ocean

Foam caressed shore infants,

Mewling, mammaling, on rough sand...

Sighting haze images...

Stars. What stars birthed the

Mother...swaddling, lullabying,

Protectress. Huntress..."Yes, little

One. Forever mountains.

Climb up, up...it is your

Time...written so long ago...

Now.

Answer 1

For it I give you a star to add to your Y!A heavens... contained in a little box off to the side.

Stars bring laughter

the little star child drinking from

the Milky Way

of Mother Heaven

To the poet

the inspiration of a star

Morning glory

before the sun invades

their tranquil playground

A sight untold

when the peach of Sunrise

lays soft as a blanket

under the falling heads

of sleepy little Diamond Babes

Who can blame them

for being tiered

from their long nights

of mountain climbing?

Cradle of the sky

laced with shimmering display

Oh how we adore the nights angels

thankful for the Sun

but also

thankful for the Night

-Your poetry often inspires me... this came from the feeling I got from your words. It is nice because, of late, I have not had much of a Muse... I am slowly getting her back and I owe it, in part, to those like you who forever give of your own soul... in you wonderful poetry... Thank you my friend...

Blessed Be in the Love of the Star Child, and Light, Siren

Answer 2

Me thinks your star is Bright......Good Morning

Yep ....Me thunking cap be on

Answer 3

And will stars still laugh at the end of man?  The evolution of Earth and Man, watched by the stars.  Guardians, Gods, or merely recorders?  Thoughts to think about.  It must be time for a nice cabernet.

Answer 4

Twinkle, twinkle little star

Elyslund you are the brightest by far.

Answer 5

Elyslund,

The perfect soundtrack to this one is a song called "Outta Space" by Billy Preston. I went to look up album credits and realized that he died Tuesday at the age of 59. If you don't recognize the name, he was the keyboardist for some of The Beatles greatest hits including 'Get Back' and was dubbed 'The Fifth Beatle'... R.I.P, William! You should dedicate that poem to his website. Grade... (h**l, how can you grade the teacher?)

Answer 6

Very Nice,

Thanks For Sharing...!!

Answer 7

Pondering poem, stars amazing, pictures now we get from

Hubble, are breathtaking, to say the least, Nothing can

capture their brillance, of colors!

Neat poem, especially liked the first stanza.

Answer 8

In the beginning unto now..

Under star light,

in a  starry starry night

          Gaea,

on her mystic  milky way

appears star bright

birthing  gods,

and  humans

crying om,  om,  om.

Your poem is primordial!

and inspirational

thank you!

Answer 9

I like `set molten iron/ air bubbling' because you make it from liquid to gas, and imply hotter temperatures still, without using a poetically inapt word like `plasma;' iron is lovely as the equilibrium element in stars.

I wonder if mewling infants are from As You Like it; this seems to be exordium of a life-cycle poem, but the quotation mark in stz. 3, l. 3 does not have a mate anywhere in the poem, which makes me ponder.

I am so sorry to keep bringing up Blake, and I am only being silly; but your last stanza does remind me of the picture with the boy holding the ladder up to the moon, captioned, `I want, I want.'  Perhaps it is the business of the lotus, thorn, and drum.

Answer 10

nice flash-back image, as a animation of mountain dweller feelings. Wonder Y U didn't come up w/ a stanza picturing the strange link between stars and ppl (astrology). nice!!

Answer 11

You are a true S cubed...Sentient StarStuff

And as always shining bright.

Answer 12

That was wonderful.

Answer 13

great