What think you of a Japanese Dawn?

Question

Japanese dawn hues

Fragrant with pastels...

Pre-orange into

Pre-blue capped cirrus,

Cypress brushed canvas...

Where the artist---

Mooded soft as my

Eyes?

Answer 1

How beautifully elegant was this piece of poetry?

My favorite part of this so descriptive poem-

Where the artist---

Mooded soft as my

Eyes?

Actually it is the perfect last stanza of the poem, just beautiful! Cheers!

Answer 2

Ohayou gozaimasu

I love pastel colors, all of them. The Japanese use them beautifully in their paintings... as did you with your words... your words always drip down stained glass into a puddle... that overflows into a river... that fills the ocean... with life.

Answer 3

I can visualize the dawn with the words you used to paint the canvas.

Answer 4

Your poem is a delicate Japanese painting, illustrating dawn as clearly as though it were a canvas hung on a wall. "Fragrant with pastels..." this is poetry.

Answer 5

Very soft, pretty piece. Nothing more to say. It sets a nice mood.

Answer 6

I like that 'fragrant with pastels'. Very pretty.

Answer 7

I remember a sunrise in Covington...

Answer 8

Very subtle. I have seen some of those bayou morns...beautiful.

Answer 9

very lovely friend.  

Answer 10

exactly.

well done, very well done.