What think you of a night poem?

Question

I will sleep now.

Let petals fall

Beyond Infinity.

Timelessness will

Become prettier.

Sleep through the

Eight-Fold Path

Evolving into

One

Mirrored Hall...

Dancing rose

Petals welcoming

The sleeping to wake,

To dance with

An 'old-spirit'

Of roses.

Answer 1

Yawn

Answer 2

"There are so many paths up a mountain, nobody knows all the ways, but the view from the top is still the same." LRB

Thank you petal, that was a lovely nigthtime waltz through the garden.

Answer 3

Was someone looking for me...........

Chicken? What's all this talk about chicken? Why, I had an uncle who thought he was a chicken. My aunt almost divorced him, but we needed the eggs.

Q. Which Came First, The Chicken Or The Egg?

A. Neither, The Rooster.

Q: Why did the rooster cross the road ?

A: To cockadoodle dooo something

ARIES (March 21 to April 19):

Chickens born under the sign of Aries are natural leaders possessing a pioneering determined spirit, who wish to make their mark on the world. They cross the road to assert themselves and seek action, daring and adventure.

Q. What Is A Haunted Chicken?

A. A Poultry-Geist.

Q. Why Did The Blonde Bake A Chicken For 3 And A Half Days?

A. It Said Cook It For Half An Hour Per Pound, And She Weighed 125.

And finally:

A chicken and an egg are lying in bed.

The chicken is leaning against the headboard smoking a cigarette, with a satisfied smile on its face.

The egg, clearly angry, grabs the sheet, rolls over, and says,

"Well, I guess we finally answered THAT question."

Ha ha ha...you better sleep tonite Elys...I'l be up early to wake you up...

I might be a bit groggy in the morning...Squiggly and I are off to Hooters.....Chick Watchin ya know....

Let the FUN begin........

Sleep softly sweet Elysabeth on petals of roses

See Ya Tomorrow ♥♥

Errrr Errr errr Ooeeeeewwww

Answer 4

You seem to care to much about looks and hope that after going asleep one day you will become prettier. No is truly ugly and will such a thing really mater after death? No.

Answer 5

May your sleep be (may it have been) a restful one. I have been dancing all day, stepping on my own toes half the time. Now it is time for me to cuddle with Morpheus.

Answer 6

Interesting...a beautiful death and rebirth.  I like the funereal of the roses' petals falling and at the end the vibrance of dancing.  I usually think of animals in buddist rebirth...but I love the roses here.

Answer 7

I like it, but I am hesitant to post and answer.  I posted a question an hour ago, but there is nothing showing less than 2 hours old.  I don't know if mt answer will ever get there.

Time Warp? or just warped time?, or is it that I have entered....................................

The twilight zone......

dee dee dee deee

Answer 8

Sleeping or rebirth?  Night carries much meaning, rose petals also.  Not bad for someone who does not know how to write poetry!  lol  My compliments.

Answer 9

Kudos, with the last rose of summer for your pocket or locket.

Answer 10

I do not like it becuse

1- It has like no ryming every poem need a bit of ryming

2- It kepts going from one thing to another and it get people very confused

Answer 11

are you read the patti smith lyrics? that's you're style!!! very good! I like it!!!

К∑∑P ЯסCКİŅ' !!!

*•*♪*•*CЯסωL∑Ҹ ЯסCК∑Я ŞסCİ∑†Ҹ*•*♪*•*

Answer 12

I don't like it.

Answer 13

Oh no, I caught the Buddhist part right off. I absolutely love the images you can bring to your poems. I know i don't say much when I answer, but I don't care about meter or rhyme. Just if I like it or not. And I like.

Answer 14

i like free verse and soft flowers.

how better to show anything?

cant think of anything.

Answer 15

good night said the rose

to travelers on the road

to dreams that come true

good night said the seaman

with a wish from the heart

for a happy new morning

yet to come

with lots of  butterflies to dance with you

Answer 16

Sleep sleep, dream dream, tomorrow brings, many things.

Answer 17

very good

Answer 18

Sufi o'mine... !   great, lovely comforting. soft, warm  quiet  count rose petals not sheep.. sheep don't smell as sweet!

Answer 19

Did you write that? Its terrific! Some poems I can't read through them because I become bored and it doesn't interest me but with this one I could right through it.

Answer 20

AAA

awesome

as

always!!

Answer 21

sweetness,beautiful

Answer 22

I think its very beautiful! nice use of words and it's easy to read. Love it!

Answer 23

a perfect "OM" of a poem.  Namaste, and sweet dreams.

Answer 24

good night sweet lady. let the dreams flow threw you like a feather in the breeze

Answer 25

It´s too interesting.

Look nice your words. I promise you.

I from Mexico City, but I comming here to take a look who do everybody write here. But is too diferent to the version of Latin America.

Saludos a los estadounidenses de alguien DeMENTE.

Answer 26

This poem is an ode to dreams. Thank you for this piece, it's extravagant!

Answer 27

falling quick

fumble threw the stick garden.

pricks of concuss theology.

the madness of the inward biology.

twisted flocks

subconscious shocks.

low rider.

callused knuckle clenched.

gear shift stretched.

the visions fly by.

but Bern threw the dirt as they die.

rebirth of self.

that is yet to see.

a splatter of who we look back and long to free.

dance and flow in the currant.

blink .

smash, turbulent ascent.

Miltie layer

becoming the self slayer.

peal the funyon.

and Spackle self hypocrisy.

eating your self to live

Answer 28

Yes I like it ,,,,I wish I could Sleep through anything ,,,,,,Just sleep would be nice!!!

I think it's wonderful!!,,,,Me thinks