What think you of a poem of the Sun?

Question

Sun Light, Sun Bright

Wishes...O Wish!

Fog speaks quiet

Parting, dew clinging

Cold,

One second on warm hand.

One mystery moment

Drop, in Time. Gaze.

Gift of air, water, early

Morn...then...gone.

Back to air. Time again

To walk dawnlight...and

Wait...for

Sun Light. Sun Bright.

Answer 1

The imagery is..........breathtaking.

The composition of senteces and paragraphs is really good. They say you sense art but you can feel when art comes from the depth of truth.

I really felt this.

Answer 2

The beauty of "dawnlight" is magical, From the dew to the

bright, your poem paints the picture.

GM

Answer 3

warming

Answer 4

I like the 2nd stanza

No..no.. I like the last..

But the 1st is good..

Lines, start ,end ..

recursive.. lovely past

Answer 5

I have to agree with all the others, wonderfl poem, a new word for my vocabulary.  Bravo!

P.S.  Unchain Snidley, there's a troll gunning for you...

Answer 6

Oh my, "dawnlight!"  A word!!

Answer 7

I got to think real hard.

Good Morning.

Answer 8

It's quite good.

Answer 9

Some cool lines here.

I love (really love):

Fog speaks quiet

and "dawnlight" is very good as well.

Answer 10

I've been getting up at 0230 a.m. i go on y/a for an hour then go on a bike ride along the coast all the elements you present in your lovely poem manifest themselves to me while i await morning glory.-blurey

Answer 11

I've always loved that time of day, so quiet and mysterious.

Answer 12

Nice. I like it.

Answer 13

I love it.  I'll edit my answer later, because I'm rushing off to work, but thanks for the nice poem before I leave.  It's beautiful.

Answer 14

So true, so true!  Been there, done that!! Your description was right on!!  Cheers!!

Answer 15

Glad to see the sewer got fixed.

Answer 16

Very. Typical

Answer 17

Ooooooooh the bright sunnnnn......

I feel like someone stuck a fork in my eye.....

Good Poem by the way....

He he he....