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What think you of a rainy, carousel Night?

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Mantles of incorrigible

Tin-rain wrap me...

The present of sleep,

Ribboned in dreams,

Bows peek-a-booing

A card...

Once more. Tomorrow.

Carousels, cotton candy

Freedom of sleep

Tonight.

Love,

Life.

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I really like it, Elys....I want the carousels and cotton candy part of life!!!
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Soft rain, tin roof, soft bed...a blissful poem!
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Awww something about this is soooo intriguing!! Grabbing the child within!!

Cheers
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Rain on a tin roof..... taps me off to dreamland every time.
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That sounds so pretty.
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Dreamy. Great poem.
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beautiful
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I'm goin' round in the same circles. Sleep well. Think deep thoughts. Love life.
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I think it would be fun to ride a carousel in the rain. :)
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Good Work Elys....and I am caught between that great phrase...'Freedom of sleep'
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