What think you of a serious Sunday poem?

Question

Sunlight fogging through

Sleepy trees eyelashed with

Dew...

Noises. Dogs shuffling

Empty bowls...a

Bark...

Playpens. No rattling,

Crying. Thumbs in mouths.

Eyes...

Soft lashes brush

Lower lids. Mothers tiptoe

Breakfast...

Sunday.

Answer 1

A mom's responsibilites on a Sunday morn.  I love the simplicity and yet it says so much.

Answer 2

Seriously suggestive!

There's no place like poem

There's no place like poem

There's no place like poem

Answer 3

Very beautiful images. Sunday is almost over now, but glad I caught this while it was still open. I was away all weekend, have a lot of catching up to do!

Answer 4

makes me long for my next Sunday off...thanks for a brilliant portrait of the Day.

Answer 5

That fully took me there, wow.

I thought a picture was worth a thousand words, that was a short film.

Thank you, love it :)

Answer 6

it is an easy sunday

Answer 7

That's lovely! Thanks for sharing.

Answer 8

Quite verbose, don't you think!  lol  A lot to learn from one that can use few words to paint great scenes. I especially liked the eyelashed dew and then coming back to eyelashes of the mother.  Well said, as always!

Answer 9

Oncore!

Answer 10

It is a good morning, except for all the work piles growing...

Answer 11

Shhhhhh........I'm huntin' wabbit !!!,,,,I remember those days of tip toeing around in the early morning hours ==Adult Quiet Thyme==

Coffee Rhyme ===Me thinks We like

Answer 12

A perfect picture of a perfect Sunday morning.

ssssshhhhhhh, don't wake the babies.....

Answer 13

And coffee.  Please say coffee!  Beautiful window!

Answer 14

I seriously believe this is a superb poem. I can hear the soft sounds, see the images. It is a gift on a dreary and sad Sunday morning.

Answer 15

Sleepy trees eyelashed with dew. I love that image. And if it weren't for the kid's alarm going off, it would be a quiet morn. Good Morning.

Answer 16

It has been a long time since I experienced one of those. Thank you for returning me to  those Sunday mornings.. when life was new!

Answer 17

ohhh what a wonderful day Sunday is.

thank you for sharing.

Answer 18

Very Nice...!!