What think you of "The Light at Miller's Pond"?

Question

Falling. Falling.

Late water hyacinth petals

Pink-plop lazy stilled

Mirrors.

Minnows--red tails

Swaying--swaying

Willow-shaded

Warm shallows.

Late summer cloud-

Plumps

And the sky is sticky--

Plum sweet as

Children lean into Fall,

Dream into sleep,

Sleep into years...

Falling. Falling.

Bundling purples,

Pinks, reds, greens

Into pages of pressed

Memories.

Answer 1

I need to find me a pond like that. So peaceful.

Answer 2

Another one of your poems in which you engage all the senses, including the psychological senses.

"Willow-shaded" and "Plum sweet" are two especially creative, descriptive phrases.

Answer 3

Lovely

Answer 4

Amazing!

Dan-ial (~iel)

Answer 5

That is lovely.  Wonderful imagry, I was there.  Sort of.  ;)

Answer 6

I think the "Light at Miller's Pond" is beautiful.  This was a joy to read.

Great sounds and images throughout.  Wonderful as always.

Answer 7

The vision of a goddess walking on water you are.

It is unfortunate Yahoo says I can give but one star..

Answer 8

This is charming...

Answer 9

Dream into sleep.. Sleep into years.

That did I and winter nears.

Nicely done.. Art has no borders

Answer 10

dreamy eloquence of a summer ending ...

Answer 11

You have dappled my memories, thank you

Answer 12

lovely lines. :)  and a lovely rhythm here.

Answer 13

I do agree with Bob.

You are painting in sensitivity.

Answer 14

Caulfield syndrome by proxy.

You have captured the moment the children reached the edge and can do no more, save for the memory.

Answer 15

Shhhhhh,,,,Fall is coming MUCH too fast ,,,,The image I have is ,,,Me fishing by a creak or a lake,,,

Answer 16

I feel myself at the water's edge watching and hearing your poetry! Beautifully written!

Cheers!