What think you of the ending Journal entry?

Question

"Every time I cried,

Then laughed at things

Thought inane...

Patiently, a gravelly voice

"Would assure me, the words

Were quite insane...

Then explain them semantically,

Linguistically emphatically...

"How all fell to Higher Order,

No need a comma, not a

Capital...all questions

Laid to rest...

"Leaving today, 8-29-08,

With awaited Manuscript,

A broken heart, a plea 'let's

Do it all again'...

"Dr. Swetman, into this morning,

Worked, corrected, worked...

All I can do is leave...

My heart in Biloxi...

"Arguing thin-ice points of

Structure...knowing this

Manuscript is his Crowning

Achievement...."

Answer 1

It must be very special.  Greatness is in the details.

Answer 2

I love it! It is a wonderful way of saying how great that poet is. You have the inner rhythm, Elys.... I have been reading his poetry lately, and I understand now.

Answer 3

Wow. That's really good. I wish I could write like that!

Answer 4

Very well said .....You could feel the love & admiration  through your words ........Nicely done

Answer 5

A beautiful tribute to a worthy man. Thank you.

Answer 6

Very Nicely Expressed...!!

Answer 7

I can feel the emotion contained in this Elys. Though here and there I stop to figure our the meaning, I can savour the music of your thoughts.

Good Morning to You!!

Answer 8

And so the child full grown, leaves the nest to bloom and

share the beauty, of a job well done. Rejoice!  the bitter/sweet

to a begining without an end. (that is what it sounds like to me.) and as it's said, "Lets do it all again." That may Be.

Kudos to your words above in poem.

Answer 9

You really have some talent!

Answer 10

He is a Master. May the Pulitzer Prize be his next year. As for you, he has taught you well. I know those are mixed tears of joy and sorrow. To me, there is nothing more satisfying than an "argument" about poetry.

Answer 11

Very nuce.

Answer 12

A fine story told by such a loving hand. You have sogged my cornflakes once again...

Answer 13

Good Morning to you!!

I would call this

Loving What You Do

Dedication and commitment is the recipe for success!!  Cheers !!

Answer 14

verrrrrry nice...im sitting here savoring your words..

Answer 15

A toil of love so beautifully expressed.

Answer 16

It can't be the ending journal entry.......the best is yet to come...chin up!!!!

Answer 17

I think that it is interesting, thanks for sharing.

Answer 18

A poet's heart scattered,

petals across the lake of pages

she watches as they float blissfully

into an unknown but hopeful,

bright future

A truly fine dedication to the process, the Inspirer, his words and your art. Much affection and admiration shows within and between the lines. blessings and thanks.

Answer 19

I am constantly pondering what it must be like to be in your shoes. You sound like you have a strange and wonderful life.

Good morning.