What to say before you go away?

Question

Here’s To You My Friend

Here’s to you my friend

so happy you let me in

Hanging on to this rope

your sweet voice brought me hope

As my sun arose today

I knew there had to be a way

To remember how you remind me

How my past does not define me

Stuck in darkness all alone

I held your picture by the phone

All these tears all those miles

can’t erase all your smiles

Words alone can’t say enough

hearing your words was oh so tough

How I wish you were near me

with my pen I hope you hear me

Here and now I want to thank you

I will never judge or rank you

After me no one above you

I don’t have to say I Love You

My actions will always show it

Then as now you will know it

This is a perfect time to start

with open arms I share my heart

So here’s to you my friend

I’m so happy you let me in

Of tomorrow I’m not sure

please help me open this door

Let’s see what’s waiting there

and on my heart I truly swear

I’ll never ever let you down

listen close to this sweet sound

It’s my heart beating again

So here’s to you my friend

©rad050307

Answer 1

        

         Hi Hydropro,

        

         Sweet memories are always be pain full for

   every one but allow me to ask weather we

   have any right over these or not ? According to

   my openion i have said in my poem ,

   (translation)" My beloved was proud of her-

   self or  i was on fault; Other wise ,departation is

   impossible bettween the lovers." However,this

   is a simple but beautifull poem when poet

   determined and says " I will never judge or rank

   you" means , the lover is not ready to point out the fault of beloved but at the same time he is not ready to put her name.      

                                                    Zakir Ranjha.

    

Answer 2

This is so smooth and elegant, so tender and compassionate as well. I hope you do have a safe trip and then come back to offer more of your wonderful poetry and sensitive presence.  I will miss you.  Thank you.

Answer 3

And where are you going this time?  I thought you went already?  Of this, sappy but well executed.  Now throw away the rope, your heart is beating and I am berating so I expect retaliation!  lol

Answer 4

Lovely and truthful, actions do speak louder then words, especially

love, sweet words make it more dear, if we walk what we talk.

"I will never intentionally let you down." We none are perfect!

Sounds like things are changing, Blessings Be. Poem is lovely.

Answer 5

I think you said it all, and eloquently!

Safe trip!

Answer 6

A great tribute to friendship. Safe journey ♥

Answer 7

Cheers! This is one of those with a melody you can sing to.

Much enjoyed.

Answer 8

aww Hydro! It`s such a sweet, and touching poem!

This one gets a Hallmark rating!

Hydro, sell it to hallmark. Then I could buy it in a card, for my best friend.