What u ppl think of this?

Question

should i give up or should i keep on getting hurt .........

when i fell in love, i did not care what ppl where saying about me, or cared what ppl did to me, all i cared about was him he was why i was put on this earth, him and me where just meant to be, when i had him in my arms it was like i just won the lottery, he meant the world to me, no one meant so much to me as he did, when it was raining it was sunny in my eyes, when i was cold he made me hot, we had so much fun.......so why end it like this?

what do u ppl think....... like it or is it a big NO NO lol just tell me wat u think of the poem....plzz.....do u think it's good 4 my age?

i'm 16......:D

Answer 1

Excuse me while i throw up.

What makes you think it is a poem?

What makes you think it is good, for any age.

Answer 2

its good wow and it was deep i wrote something like tht but im only 13