What u think of this poem??

Question

i was lookin through my book of all my writing an poems an etc n i found this old poem its one of the first i ever wrote so i just wondering what u thought of it

i really liked you

thought u always be there

i felt so much better

when ever i thought of you

i really felt

we would've work things out

of that i believe

had no doubt

wanted to fix it

wanted to try it

thought we had so much going

to just say good bye

obliviously u didn't feel the same

now its time for the pain

but like rain on my window

it eventually drips of an goes away

the memories

never 2 be forgotten

cause i really did care

an wanted to be the one

oo well

life goes on

time passes by

soon i find another

who appreciate

n love

n know i am true

n not like the others

Answer 1

I know all the 10 year old's will tell you how great it it.

It's not.

You really don't know anything about poetry, do you?

Answer 2

i don't like it

Answer 3

Aside from the grammatical slang and my pondering the word usage of "obliviously" was that meant to be or was it intended to be "obvious"?

..It it is alright, however so much the same as so many others it does not impassion me or make me want to read and reread it.