What u think of this poem?

Question

this is one i think i posted a while back but not sure just let me knoe what u think thanx

ive been thinking so much

my everyday life has become a blur

if u ask me what i did last week

i could'nt even reminisce

2 busy missing

my missed miss

thinking of that missed kiss

an regretting i ever thought i loved someone

who would make me feel

so good an so bad

girl

why did we meet

why were u so dam sweet

every time i think of u

my heart skips a beat

see this is what u do to me

Answer 1

your poem is very good and your emotions showed quite deeply throughout without going off message  

Answer 2

I like it

Send it to her =]

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And answer mine if you can please

Answer 3

awesome did u write that? it could be a song just add music.

Answer 4

yeah pretty good,

and its cool to meet a guy who writes at all.

mine?

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Answer 5

It reads like lyrics to me. Maybe hook up with someone who can put it to music and then (Romeo & Juliet style) stand under the girl's balcony and shout out to her.