What would be a good name?

Question

I am writing a short story, and I want to have a good name for it, because it is for school. The story is pretty good (in my opinion anyway). Here is a basic summery of the story:

There is this girl named Eliana (me) and she goes to meet her friend at a ferry dock. He has come a long way, mainly to see me. His name is Jon. He has blonde hair, and the most beautiful blue eyes you have ever seen. Anyway, I show him my town, and some of my favorite places. Slowly, we start to fall in love. When it is time for Jon to leave, we both don't want him to leave. We fight for Jon to stay, and his parents agree to let him spend a week more, but after the week is up, he has to leave. We cry, and say things like we will never forget one another, and we will always love one another. Then he leaves, and life slowly goes back to it's normal ways.

So, do you have any suggestions of what title I could give this story? Any suggestions, or any comments on my story would be helpfull. :-D

Answer 1

Not Another Love Story

note: try to highlight the part where you're slowly falling for him and the part where you(and him) fight for him to stay longer.. make those part a bit more dramatic and add more feelings to those parts.. then i suggest that you end your story with a part that makes you have a continuation,like a line..a letter from him... or something like that, just to make the story sound like it still goes on..

Answer 2

well if your looking for a boy name::::::: jackson, josh, david, matthew, sam

girl name: amanda, jessica, lisa, molly, heather, colleen

Answer 3

"we met at the ferry dock"

Answer 4

"Love though art a pain"

Answer 5

"The Trials and Tribulations of a First Love"

Half joking/half serious on that title. Sorry, I'm never good with titles. lol

Answer 6

Forbidden Ferry, Ferry Forever,  Love Ferry,  Eliana and Jon, Love trip, Romeo and Eliana,

Answer 7

"Love Boat"

No no no.......too obvious, and already taken.........

How about.......... The Love Ferry.

maybe you can include a passage about a magic "Fairy" you see, who makes you fall in love........

and then the title can have two meanings.......

The Love "Fairie"  .

No?

wow.......you're picky..........

okay..........how about........

" Love Left on the 5:15 boat? "

"Sea of Tears" ?

yeah......that's good.........I like that one..........snappy, has lots of appeal.............go with that.................