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What would be a good title for this manga?

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Ok, I am writing a story but I cannot come up with a decent name. Here is the basic plot.

10 years ago, Oliver's little sister, Mia was kidnapped by the workers of Chemotech, a secret government orginazation which creates artificial vempires. Now, Oliver, who has long scince put the painful memory of his sister behind him, finds a girl with blood-red hair and glasses lying on the beach. She calls herself Kokoromi, and she is an escaped Methuselah, an artificial vampire. She tells of the horrible crimes Chemotech has been performing to create thease sins against nature. They use a process called Xenostablization, which slowly changes the DNA over several years through the use of a device hooked to Kokoromi's spinal cord called the cytofuser. The scientists realized her escape, and they are now hunting her down in order to silence her and prevent her from exposing thier secrets. After Oliver finally breaks into Chemotech to destroy the Chemonegator(a machine the children are hooked to in order to have the cytofuser inserted) he discovers a horrible secret:Kokoromi is Mia, Olivers long lost sister, who was transformed into a vampire 12 years ago.

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  1. okay i love the story  you should do a manga   email me and tell me the rest of the story k


  2. Hi !

    Good story with interesting characters ! A title ? "Mirrors" , maybe .

    Good luck with your book !

    =^..^=

  3. ChemoDNA and The Chemo Project are both really good suggestions, but they make one think about cancer... If that's the point, then cool, but if not, you might think of changing it to ChemiTech?

    > Artificial Bloodlust

    > Kokomori's Secrets

    > Sins Against Nature (to quote you :P)

    > Blood-Red Hair And Glasses (again, quoting you, 'cause this sounds cute to me)

    > The Cyrofusion (or Chemonegator, or Methuselah) Experiments

    > Sins, Silence, Secrets and Scars

    > A Bloody Conspiracy Theory

    And just to be funny:

    >> Olive Juice and Blood

    ADD:

    > The Children Cry For Blood

    > In Corpus Dementi (In [a] Body Insane)

    > Children Of Blood & Lies

  4. "BLOOD SECRETS"

    "TRANSFUSAMATION"

    "METHUSELAH"

    "RED SINS"

    "CRIMSON SCOURGE"

  5. Wow! I think that sounds like a really great manga! You should get it published when you are done! I would love to read it.

    Here are some names that sound good for it:

    Blood Brother

    Artificial Blood

    Chemo

    The Chemotech Vampires

    Xeno

    Sins of Nature

    Vampire DNA


  6. Ooo, it's like Ghost in the Shell meets Hellsing.

    Anyway.

    -XenoVamp

    -You could name the artificial vampire and use that as the title.

    -Cytofusation

    I'm sorry, my brain's fried at the moment.

  7. Interesting manga. I think it is pretty well thought out. A title could maybe be something like "Vampire's brother" or "Chemo-DNA"

  8. That's so sad! =( But its a good story line! Robot vampires? That's a toughie, but maybe Robo-Blood, or The Chemo Project. Just one question: If Mia was kidnapped 10 years ago how could she be turned into a vampire robot 12 years ago?  

  9. I have some suggestions:

    Fake- As in artificial vampires

    12 years later xD

    Switch- as in from human to vampire =]7

    Long and lost..- as in long lost sister

    okay i know they are lame but There you go =]

    x

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