What would you say composes is a fruitful life?

Question

This is juiced a passing phase folks - do not fruit....er I mean fret.

Fruity Jayku

by Jellz Fisher 080811

Pretending it’s “fine”

When it’s all gone so pear-shaped

Not a fruitful life

“Hey, she’ll be apples”

Man, are you out of your tree?

Gets under my skin!

Take pithy on me

Leaving no stone unturned yet

Re-juiced to bad taste

Life give you lemons?

Make a whisky sour

Sounds more appealing!

Answer 1

Pithy is hereby granted

albeit verse is slanted

But whiskey with lemon?

a drink for a  demon!

Is pithy a is or is pithy a are.....hmmm.

Answer 2

Nice and fruity, I liked it

Answer 3

Very creative, you Fruit Loop!

;-)

Interesting, I must admit

Answer 4

how about "peeling all my skin!"

and

"leaving no pit to spit"

lol

i liked it Jellz!

Answer 5

nice Jayku's...pithy granted (I still say it's the water...)hee!

Answer 6

well i liked it though i feel you left me hungry and confused lol good luck

Answer 7

Very fruity poem, juiced with the Fruit of the Tree of Knowledge.