What you think of this rap?

Question

Sittin' here thinking about the murder of Emmett Till/Thinking what a stupid reason to kill/I wonder how Caroline Bryant feels/can't forget about J.W. Milam and Roy Bryant/got me thinking how can people be so violent/can't believe the m o t h e r f*****k e r s got acquitted/for the crime they commited/later on they even admitted/its like the crime was premitted/so god tell me why/Emmetts mother had to say goodbye/its really bugging me like a fruit fly/

I will probably write the rest but tell me what you think of it so far.

Answer 1

its alright keep working on it and you need to write in bars check out mine and tell me what you think http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;...

Answer 2

it sounds good if u rap it fast

Answer 3

its pretty good but i think you should keep working on this, its some real stuff  you talking about and thats good

Answer 4

It Sucks.

Answer 5

Not Bad Not Bad Not Bad

I actully liked it.

Answer 6

Its ok. I dont know about the fruit fly part though.