Whatchya Think?

Question

Please tell me if you like the poems and what ever about them you want. Criticism Valued my friend says. You can find more of her work at writerscafe.org under her name Hina.

Poem 1:

I will live,

And see the day,

When happiness overcomes,

Our fears,

I will live,

Get over this sickness,

And see the sky,

Once again,

I will live,

Breathe freely,

I will live,

And soak up the world,

I will live,

To see the sun rise,

I will live,

To see the sun fall,

I will live,

Breathe again,

See again,

Feel again,

I will,

Be Alive.

Answer 1

I love it. Bloody brilliant! So evocative and the imagery? Wow! Wonderful work...thank you for sharing!

Answer 2

i love it you have real talent! sometimes thats exactly how i feel and i dont think anyone will understand....

your super brave to put ur poems up on the internet and not mind people telling you that you suck. i could never do that

Answer 3

from hope to hopless that is actually how everyone is at least once denie it or not its true

Answer 4

Completely awesome.  Very very very good.  I like it... a lot.

would you look at mine?

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