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Whats a good conclusion paragraph for a paper about me? read short paper included and help me please!!!!?

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The name that was given to me on the date of my birth is Erika Danielle James. I have attended ten different schools in three different states and this is the biggest school I have attended thus far. I was born on September 11, 1993 in Atlanta, Georgia. I lived there for nine and a half years. I currently live with my father and sister here in Collierville. And I have only been here since last December. My sister’s name is Kayla James and she is a senior here at Collierville High. I also have an older brother, Skyler Sapp, who is 21 and he graduated from Cordova High School in 2005.

One interesting thing about me is the fact that I love sports. I am not the typical girly-girl. I love to watch and play them. My favorite sports to watch are football, softball/baseball, soccer, basketball, and tennis. The sports I love to play are basketball, soccer, and softball. I have twelve different trophies and most of them are from soccer—the sport I love the most. Sports are how I escape from everything around me. If I have had a bad day at home or school, I just go outside and start playing. All my worries then seem to fade away.

I have many things I am proud of but my academics are what make me the proudest of myself. I have made all As on every progress report and report cardmy whole life with the exception of one B zi accumulated last year. When I was in kendergarten, I was smarter than my peers so my teacher recommended I skip first grade, so I did. Since I did skip a grade, I have always been the youngest in all of my classes. When I was in eighth grade, I was chosen to be an All-American Scholar. Only 100,000 people out of every student in the United States can be in it and I was on of those. I was recognized in a yearbook with my picture and a list of my academics, interests, and family members.

One thing not too many people know is that I am an actively involved in my community. I have volunteered to help at some animal shelters here in the area. Last year, I helped everyday after school at the Boys and Girls Club of America. When I lived in Georgia, I would spend my free time helping my elderly neighbors and others in my neighborhood that needed it. I do it because it makes me feel good inside and out. I have always given back to my community and I plan on continuing to do so.

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i need a five sentence conclusion paragraph (7 if sentences are choppy).

please red the story before answering so you will know what im even talking about.

i am in the 11th grade so it doesnt have to be like a college paper but needs to obviously make sense.

please give me an actual paragraph, not tips on how to write a conclusion or anything like that. i already know how to write one but im just stumped right now!

all answers are greatly appreciated and the best answer will get ten points IMMEDIATELY!

thanks a lot.

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  1. I currently live with my father and sister here in Collierville. And I have only been here since last December.

    Put these two sentences together. Put a comma at the end of the first one. Don't ever start a sentence with the word "and."

    You have a few spelling and grammar issues.

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