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Whats this poem mean??

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the sun shinning into the sunset to sleep upon the moonlight bright

the night sky brings upon the darkness of the frozen time

time has melted and stop

objects afloat as everything stood still

the lonely soul wanders as it notices the strange world

the thoughts of the real among the lies of a performance

looking deep into the heart to open up with just a key that she holds around her neck

for another to hold is to break the world into many pieces

tears of broken dreams streaming from the fake smile that she holds

to know the trueself is to take time to understand

words being told to her haunts by the beating drums of the seconds ticking

ticking from the broken clock that time can not hold

beauty of within is only true love can open the eyes to see

being whole is what needs to be filled to see the light

as there is only enough space that needs to be completed

the emptiness to be one day become whole as one

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  1. I think it's about the big bang


  2. I think it's too bad that people today can string together a series of disjointed images, verbless phrases, incomprehensible random drivel and grammatical errors, without punctuation, capitalization, rhythm, rhyme or any meaning whatsoever, and call it poetry.  

    In other words, it doesn't mean anything.  It's pseudo-intellectual obfuscation with the intent of making people think it is somehow profound.  And of course, there will alwys be those who want to show off how perceptive and sophisticated *they* are by fawning all over it.

    Did you write it?  Are you hoping you might have lucked into something that someone else might validate for you?
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