Whats your comment on this poem ?

Question

Just know , pearls are not spread in front of pigs ,

It is gold dealers who knows about jewelry not jerks ,

What matters for a blind , jewelry or glass ?

If blind looks at you ,never think you are glass

Answer 1

These are very good subtle gestures. I agree with the messages.(Some people)  may get the wrong idea. Sad fact.

Chrisi  T.

Answer 2

its ok i guess

it doesnt really make sense

Answer 3

i can see that you are using metaphors,

i am fond of using those too, especially when i have a lot of issues with people whom i don't want to get hurt if they read my piece. can i suggest a title? "uncommon sense" ♥

it's kinda carefree and yet it has a meaning :)

Answer 4

It's a bit S**t, no offence.

Answer 5

Well it sound good, and i do not understand it properly,I need time to know your message, but you are good at it

Answer 6

that makes NO SCENTS