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When you want to, but can't, what do you do?...Did you think I was through?

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I Wasn’t Through With You

Hey diddle diddle

chicken little the sky ain't falling

it's me calling

you out for what you are

irrelevant pygmy elephant that

can't tell if it is up or down

an insolent clown

nose brown from kneeling down to kiss

aspects of highness you'll never know

as you blow hard winds of ignorance

that open vents in my chamber of discontent

And so I rant because I can’t stoop that low

Can’t ever show even though I know

That I am righteous in my rant

Don’t tell me I can’t

Or else

©rad081508

That oughta do it

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  1. wow. That is really good.  The words speak to me. I can see where you are coming from and this is great.


  2. Man thats awesome, have a star

  3. No stranger

    to danger,

    to righteous anger,

    stand and preach brother,

    not any other

    sister nor mother

    will know the truth,

    song rings uncouth

    beyond pain and into passion

    thoughtless fashion

    becoming what's free

    the travesty

    sacrilege in liberty,

    calm your fire and your word

    lines twixt black and white are blurred

    we all have justice, cause to rant,

    don't say we can't, don't say we can't

    we will.

    HP - Time to say, seize the day,

    I'm with you in this fight you write,

    our words are swords,

    no need for bullets or for guns

    so take my hand, the fun's

    just beginning.

  4. This is simply awesome!

  5. i like that

  6. you always was full grown...blown full of life, and pain and insights and joy and really frikken good rants!

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