When you want to, but can't, what do you do?...I rant?

Question

Rant On My Brother, Rant On

I've had enough of biting this tongue

Twisted two fisted port listed and going down

For the last time

With my fast rhyme

I'll beat you defeat you

cause i see through your clear view

window less shell that keeps in this h**l

this reek that i smell the lies that you tell

to deflect the rays being shot

cause your not my equal

this ain't no prequel

won't be no sequel

your not my equal

and I know it

and that's all I need to know

©rad081508

I have my reasons

Answer 1

Here's my rant

Picturing you tied firmly to a bed of nails

Gnashing at the teeth and hearing useless wails

You tore out my heart as you played the lovers game

Now I laugh and howl with Satan as death calls out your name

Angry poems make great metal music lyrics. Keep it up you may be writing for the next band.

Answer 2

If anger be this bite of life, rant on!

Answer 3

very good ,,, the anger is controlling her, and works well

Answer 4

Loved it...am going through pure unmitigated h**l trying to transport a just purchased car from next state...the above works well if I switch around a few words.  Can you hear my ranting...

I have never seen more catch 22's in my entire life!

Answer 5

Is this a rap challenge? No, just kidding, but your words do have that angry flow to them which is becoming more and more popular by musical association. Now you must don baggy clothes and voluminous gold chains and begin to talk in a voice that speaks only somewhat understandably.

I have issues with the rap genre, but not with this poem as this is not its intent. You know what you need to know, that is good, and I know what I need to know. Long may your poetry sing, long may I live to hear.

Answer 6

The title says it all. "Rant On My Brother, Rant On".

If I was a Shrink I'd prescribe reading a fun, light-hearted book such as Salinger's Catcher in the Rye. That thing is hilarious.