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Horsing Around

Colt 49

Lead to the track

Thoroughly bred to run

Away

I'm off kilter

Leading the pack

As I come around

Bend to my last turn

Back stretched

Flying to the end

Ahead by who knows

Photo

Finished

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  1. lol very cute! I loved it. I pictured a frozen (like still, not ice) man at the end. lol


  2. I like it.

  3. Some times the simple ones say the most.  This is one of those.  My compliments.

  4. awww man and to think I had $10 on you! I need to know the final result!!

  5. great title, it makes this poem fun...got more like this?

  6. Well paced to present the racing atmosphere.  Slight intro (before race) - great amount of action and detail (during race) - and the release of tension and let down (of the photo finish). Well done ♥

  7. Now that one wasn't run at Jefferson Downs...

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