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Whether prose, poetry, or proverb, please critique.?

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Two angels bumped into each other and dropped a piece from Heaven.

I reached down, picking up the ball, as I ran at full speed to my goal, leaving all obstacles behind me.

But someone caught me from behind, and I dropped the ball.

Then from that ball, two big beautiful dove's eyes looked up at me and said, It's alright. "You caught me, didn't you?"

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  1. Unclear, it reads kinda dreamlike, and like a dream, it has me searching for some meaning to attach to it, but I'm failing. Sometimes a dream is just a random set of images signifying nothing.

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