Which do you like better of my poems, Two Versions!

Question

This is the first one, i attempted to fix up,

You didnt just break my heart,

You didnt just tear it apart,

You rippped it up in little peices

and put it through despair,

But most of all, you killed it

Its unfixable, its unreplaceable

just face it, its over

-or-

You didnt just break my heart,

You didnt just tear it apart,

You rippped it up in little peices

and put it through despair,

still unaware if you loved me or not, (thats as far as i got)

Any tips, words or lines i can use, ANYTHING please anything helps :)

Answer 1

It is too short, it is like you just started and then there was an interruption for commercials.

Answer 2

i like the ending to the second one. Keep writing.

Answer 3

I like the flow of the second one.