Which poem do you like best? PART 1?

Question

When I look in your eyes, I see our love

I see stars, the sky, and I see freedom

I see color, sparkle, and heaven above

I see all the glory of God's kingdom

When you're not with me, I'm like a caged bird

But when you enter the room, I'm set free

When your face is seen, and your voice is heard

All I can think about is you and me

I think about the love that we share

The good and the bad, we've been through so much

Yet know our love is true, and that we both care

My reassurance comes through your touch

When your presence has left, my eyes shed a tear

Yet when you are gone, I know you're still here

this sonnet or the one in my other post

Answer 1

I havn't read the other one but I really like this one... it's simple, passionate and easy to understand. Obviously everyone knows that your talking about a love so strong that when you aren't around the one you love you feel alone and imprisoned and only the one you love can set you free. Very nice :)

Answer 2

You are a hopeless romantic

When I look into your eyes,

I see reflected dollar signs

or is it pounds or euros there

I guess if it's cash you don't care

I buy you clothes and rings of Gold

But you show me the shoulder, cold

The pedestal I set you on.

but all too soon you were gone.

I saw you sometimes after that

Picking up punters by the flats

I feel stupid, to the core

falling in love with a w***e.

Answer 3

Part 3. That is really good !

Answer 4

part 3 it makes me cry