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Which poem do you like best? PART 3 (FINAL PART)?

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Our eyes meet

Our hearts burn

Do you feel the heat?

Will I ever learn?

Love isn't true

Or so I thought

Until I met you

In the web of your love I got caught

See the crying

Feel the hate

Emotions flying

As of late

I loved you

Or so I believed

If only I knew

I was being deceived

My heart was shattered

By your deception

Pieces scattered

Distorted perception

The one excuse

For my heart's death

Was that it's for good use

But now it's out of breath

Will I ever love again?

Will I ever feel the burn?

I don't want to feel the pain

But now I have learned

To guard my heart

With utter care

And to be smart

With whom I share

One heart broken

Is a lesson learned

And feelings left unspoken

Are feelings earned

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  1. I really like this poem. It is kind of sad however everyone has experience the lost of a love one and you have really sum it up


  2. your really good at writing poems i like that poem!

  3. I really like the first and the third.

    and I think the first one she end like:

    Our eyes meet

    Our hearts burn

    Do you feel the heat?

    Will we ever meet?

    It just kinda sounds like love at first sight.

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