Which poem do you like most, and why???

Question

These are my poems, which is your favourite and why?

"Love, the wrong one"

Hiding well within, Never letting go,

Freedom from this, Never will I know,

My Heart thumping, Will it ever end?

The thought of you, My best friend,

Hurting from inside, Tearing me apart,

When I come near, You turn and dart,

Never do I wonder, Why you run from me,

You make me cry, Together we should be.

"Beloved grandpa"

Death came, It took him away,

My beloved Grandpa, I wish he could stay,

His heart had paused, Stopped for too long,

Before we knew it, He was gone,

Months went by, Feels like he’s here,

I stop for a second, To have a peer,

I search around me, Hoping for the chance,

To possibly see him, Just a quick glance,

Grandpa wasn’t there, He will never be,

I get on with my life, Knowing he’s looking down on me.

"Tears from Within"

Tryin to hide; it’s not working as planned,

Seeing my life; finding it hard to stand,

For I never thought I’d see the day,

I let a guy do it that way.

I felt the warmth; of his hand,

Against my ribs; my neck; my hand.

Feeling the breath ripped from inside,

I had an attack; I couldn’t hide.

I was shaking; couldn’t stay steady,

What have I done; I wasn’t ready.

Days went by; still seeing the guy,

I realise now; the reason why.

He was in love; I started to cry.

A month went on; I still wonder why,

He kept coming back; when i'd said goodbye.

Thankyou in Advance....

Answer 1

Three very beautiful poems, it is hard to choose which I like best.  If I have to choose it will be the first one "Love, the wrong one", the reason is because I long to be with the girl that I love but I can't be.

Please write more as you are good at writing from your heart.

Best Wishes

Answer 2

i would have to say there all something to bring tears but i love "Tears from Within" it just shows how love is and y its so great and how some girls are afraid and confused that guys could love them even after all of the things that go on.