Which poem is better? i wrote them both?

Question

I HATE!

I hate that you always know what to say and do.

I hate that you’re sweet and kind. I hate that ur always on my mind.

I hate that you always care. I hate that you always there.

I hate that you never treated me bad so I never had a reason to leave you.

I hate that I hurt you so much during the time we were together

I hate that we eventually broke apart.

I hate that day you called and tore my whole world apart,

!I hate that you just went and broke my lonely heart </3

I hate that one of these days you’ll love another girl even more how you once loved me.

I hate that I feel incomplete without your love.

I hate that I can not let no other guys to love me because none of them wont compare to all the love u once gave to me.

Boy your just always on my mind and I hate how I just can’t get a hold of myself and just to go on with my life. The love that you gave to me was my strength and weakness. Your love is what I had always wanted and needed. I’m sorry for wasting so much time to actually realize that. I guess that now im just too late. And I hate the fact that im just late.

But ur the boy that I will always have miss weather u love it or hate it ur gonna have to get used to it. my heart and who I will always miss

d**n!!! I just hate how much I love you!!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 1

Poem one I could not read. I do not use the word hate. I am a peaceful mellow kind of guy, and found it despicable, (yes I hate, hate) so with it eliminated number 2 is better.

I sense that you like to repeat yourself. That can get very annoying, just so you know. I wouldn&#039;t want to carry around either poem in my memory, or hang them on my wall, or flash them to my girlfriend. I think their more of personal fights, going on in yourself. I liked the fact that you had courage to go deep and express yourself. Its beneficial.

Answer 2

both i think are good but ill go with the second one

Answer 3

the first one

Answer 4

I like the second it made me feel for you tear tear :( waaaaaaaa