Which poem is better?

Question

HELLO STRANGER

Hello stranger,

Mother told me not to talk to you,

but sometimes I feel like its the right

thing to do.

Talk to a stranger, who has never

heard you wine

just sit back and listen

and loosen up their mind.

Hello stranger,

You are not to blame

for you wont be a stranger long

soon you will have a name.

Hello Stranger,

the day is going bye

and im afraid I have to leave,

I have to say good bye.

But even though I did what mother said not.

I feel down in my heart that,

I have learned a lot.

When this day started you were

just a face in a crowd with no end

but in the end

you have a name and I have

a new friend

Hello stranger.

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FOR ANYONE WHO CARES

For anyone who cares

when I cry

it does not mean im weak

for anyone who cares

when I say sarcasm

it does not mean im giving cheek

for anyone who cares

when I smile

it does not mean I dont regret

for anyone who cares

when I say im happy

it does not mean I forget

for anyone who cares

I have a heart too

so it still hurts when I dont hear from you

hurts worse then come backs,

wise cracks and evil glares

so this poem is for

anyone who cares.

Answer 1

i really find them both good...

but i like for anyone who cares more. the ending made me smile.

Answer 2

LOL I liked them both.  They both do a great job of tying the whole thing up at the end in a nice, pretty package.  The last few lines of each are the hook that got me smiling.  If you put a gun to my head, I'd say "Hello Stranger" was better.  I liked the fact that it points out in a sly, naughty way that everyone is a stranger until we give them a chance to open their mouth.  You're mom was a stranger to you when you were born, did she tell you not to talk to her?  LOL.   Just don't take candy from a stranger... Do you have a poem for that too? :)

There are some spelling errors but what do you expect when you're nine?  

whine -  not wine

by - not bye (the day is going bye)