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Which poem should i send in?

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I have to write a poem for my class, which one should i choose?

- Escaped -

Huge velvet patch of darkness

lands on my skin

begin to crawl

Oh, cant you feel it hum?

It's seeped into my bones

Carved it all.

Take my fingers in your palm

I am no where near

fear is lost

and I am hole'd

Strange

didn't you see

the piece

fall?

- Untitled -

Two darked creases

leave billowing dimples

at each side of my passion swollen lips

but two puckering pink masses

slowly crinkling their soft edges upwards

lifted by silvery spider-thin puppet strings

intricatley hand-woven by God

who, it seems

has been striken with a dire desire

to preform a whimsical romance

In his theater

of Life

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  1. The first is clearly superior...


  2. good job ! i like everybody to check mine out too

    love poem

  3. the second one

  4. The second one, it seems more poetic.

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