Which version is better?

Question

1.)

http://i38.tinypic.com/jt05fn.jpg

2.) http://i36.tinypic.com/fn4y2f.jpg

or whats another thing i can add to my pik tp make it look better?

Answer 1

I don't like none but if I must choose, the second one is better.

Answer 2

they are both rlly ugly but the second is better

Answer 3

i like the second 1 best =]

Answer 4

you could space out the numbers more or and silver sparklers or both  i like the second one better to let you know

Answer 5

nice

Answer 6

I like the second one a lot!

Answer 7

the second one because the first one has too much going on in the left, and is heavy black on the right. my advice(took 2 years of art in school w?great teacher), space out writing on the left because it makes it too busy. good piece though. awesome.