Whispering Leaves? What do you think?

Question

Listen to the trees

They whisper while I hike

A twig snaps below my feet

I hear it's scream of pain

The ancient oak is undisturbed

By the gentle breeze

Its leaves whisper to me in the calm

"Come and stay, you'll love it here"

Yet I know that I must

Be heading back to the cabin

My tiny paradise in the Woods

Amongst the whispering trees.

Answer 1

I think it is very creative piece of writing. Good Job!

Answer 2

it has a great sense of nature =]

Answer 3

I really like it!

Its like I can sense the silent conversations of the nature around you. It's really good!!