Who can edit this again for me please? It's really very weird. 10 points for grab!?

Question

We should put ourselves in others’ shoes and treat others as how we would like to be treated. We will feel indignant or upset if we ourselves met such incidents, so we should not do it to make others feel sad too.

Our behaviours can affect our family’s reputation. If we demonstrate good behaviours, it not only shows that we are moral people, it also shows that we are well taught our parents. Everybody has the responsibility to protect their family’s prestige.

The students’ behaviours can affect their school’s reputation. If they demonstrate good behaviours, it not only shows that they are moral people, it also shows that they have received good education in school. Students have the responsibility to protect their school’s prestige.

Public space is a place that is open and accessible to all citizens. So, it’s our responsibility and duty to protect the public properties there, and not damaging them.

It is inappropriate for them to drop litter anywhere. Not only that they will pollute the environment, they will also destroy the look of the place. Everyone has the responsibility to keep our country clean and green. Garden city will always be a name without meaning if we do not drop the habit of littering.

We should pay full attention when crossing the road. We never know what one second of clumsiness can lead up to.

Foreigners may see him doing this and will affect their impressions of our country, hence, making our country losing prestige. It is important to protect our country’s prestige.

In the XXXXXX, we can see people XXXXXX, and many mannerisms. We should learn the correct manner of doing and treating things to make ourselves better people.

Answer 1

We should strive to put ourselves in others’ shoes and treat others as we would like to be treated. We would feel indignant or upset if we, ourselves. met with certain incidents so we should try not to make others feel sad either.

Our behaviors can affect our family’s reputation as well as our own. If we demonstrate good behaviors, it not only shows that we are moral people, it also shows that we are well taught our parents. Everybody has the responsibility to protect their family’s prestige.

A student's behaviors can even affect their school’s reputation. If they demonstrate good behaviors, it not only shows that they are moral people, it also shows that they have received good education in school. Students have the responsibility to protect their school’s prestige.

Public space is a place that is open and accessible to all citizens. So, it’s our responsibility and duty to protect the public properties there, and not damage them.

It is inappropriate for people to drop litter anywhere. Not only will they will pollute the environment, they will also destroy the look of the place. Everyone has the responsibility to keep our country clean. Garden city will always be a name without meaning if we do not drop the habit of littering.

We should pay full attention when crossing the road. We never know what one second of clumsiness can lead to.

Foreigners may see us doing this and it will affect their impressions of our country, hence, making our country lose prestige. It is important to protect our country’s prestige.

In the XXXXXX, we can see people XXXXXX, and many mannerisms. We should learn the correct manner of doing and treating situations and people to make ourselves better people.

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SERIOUSLY scattered thoughts.  Very poor structure.  Still, I corrected the blatant misuses of word tense, filled in missing words and extracted unnecessary wordage.  You have a long way to go for a passing grade.

Answer 2

We should put ourselves in other people's shoes and treat them like how we would want other people to treat us. Should such an incident happen to us, we will feel indignant or upset about the other party's actions. Likewise, we should not do it to make others feel how we would feel if we were to be treated badly too.

Our behaviours can affect our family’s reputation. If we demonstrate good behaviours, it not only shows that we have good morals, it also shows that our parents have taught us well. Everybody has the responsibility to protect their family’s prestige.

Students’ behaviours can affect their school’s reputation. If they demonstrate good behaviours, it not only shows that they have a good upbringing, it also shows that they have learnt well in school. Students have the responsibility to protect their school’s prestige the same way they protect their family's prestige.

Public space is a place that is open and accessible to all citizens. It is our responsibility and duty as a citizen to protect and take care of the public properties, not damage them.

It is inappropriate for people to drop litter anywhere. Not only will they pollute the environment, they will also destroy the look of the place. Everyone has the responsibility to keep our country clean and green.

'Garden City', a name known to many which portrays our country will always be a name that is meaningless we do not drop the habit of littering.

We should pay full attention when crossing the road. We never know what one second of clumsiness could lead to.

Foreigners may see him doing this and this will affect their impressions of our country, and thus cause our country to lose prestige. It is important to protect our country’s prestige.

In the XXXXXX, we can see people XXXXXX, and many mannerisms. We should learn proper mannerisms to make ourselves better people.

Answer 3

Ehp iv gone blind 8-I

Answer 4

too long, no way im reading that

Answer 5

Man, a lot of mistakes. I don't know where to begin. I really want to help, but this is a fizzle. Are you writing an essay, or what??? Your structure isn't good, because you need an intro paragraph, at least 5 sentences long, stating your attention grabber, and topic sentence, then listing your three assertions. Then, for your second, third and fourth paragraphs, support each assertion with at least 3 supporting details, listing your source, like the website of where you got your info from. You must find quotes! And lastly, for your 5th paragraph, restate the topic sentence in different words, and list the three assertions again. Then write something for the readers to think about.

Remember:

-indent

-use linking words

-correct spelling and grammer

-capitals and punctuation

-no run-on sentences

-adjectives and adverbs

-can't use I, or I think

-can't state a question

-try not to use I, we, you, he, she, etc (very informal)

Well, I hope I helped! Good luck!

Answer 6

Check your grammar, and proof read for words missing from context of sentence. Also try joining up a couple of shorter sentences, to make longer ones. Make sure your text reads clearly.

Answer 7

I think you need a thesis statement in the introduction...something along the line of...

Our behavior can dictate how we are precieved and affects our environment more than we are aware of.  By being more aware of our own morals we can bring respect to ourself and to our family, ensure the safety of our earth (?) and even makes other people happier with our pleasant courtesy....

Something along this....you can think about it... and use it if you like...good luck...