Who can help me with grammar ?

Question

can someone help with the grammar of this im putting it on a card for me and my gfs one month

to the love of my life this first month together has been wonderful its been hard not seeing you everyday and its hard not to think of you twenty four seven your love is better than any love iv ever had in the past and its just going to grow from here im looking forward to another great month and Wednesday :P I LOVE YOU

Answer 1

well you might want to do this:

name,

you are the love of my life. the first month has been wonderful and its hard not seeing you everyday... i cannot resist thinking of you 24/7. your love cannot compare you to any other love ive experienced. each day the love is growing stronger between us. Im looking foward to having the most amazing month and wednesday.

i love you

love,

(name)

Answer 2

To the love of my life,

This first month together has been wonderful. It has been hard not seeing you every day and it is hard not thinking about you 24/7. Your love is better than any love I've ever had in the past and it's just going to grow from here. I am looking forward to another great month, as well as Wednesday.

I love you!

Answer 3

If you mean that Wednesday marks the actual one month anniversary, I would

suggest changing that line to say:  " I'm looking forward to Wednesday and all

the great months to come."  Otherwise, the grammar is correct.

I do hope you intend to properly punctuate this lovely sentimental card, but you

asked about grammar, not punctuation, so I'm sure you know how you want it.

Answer 4

To the love of my life:

This first month together has been wonderful.  It's been hard not seeing you everyday and it's hard not to think of you twenty-four/seven.  Your love is better than any love I've ever had in the past.  It's just going to grow from here.  I'm looking forward to another great month and especially Wednesday.  

I LOVE YOU !!!

Answer 5

i r help u wit gammer .

Answer 6

Just send it as a text as it is. She won't care about the total lack of punctuation. Every day is two words, but what the heck.

All that after just one month?

Answer 7

"To the love of my life.

This first month together has been wonderful. It has been hard not seeing you everyday and its hard not to think of you twenty four seven. Your love is better than any love I've ever had in the past, and it just keeps growing. I'm looking forward to another great month, and Wednesday :P I LOVE YOU."

You're welcome.

Answer 8

To the love of my life,

    This first month together has been wonderful. Its been hard not seeing you everyday and its hard not to think of you twenty-four-seven. Your love is better than any love iv ever had in the past and its just going to grow from here. I'm looking forward to another great month, and Wednesday .

:P I LOVE YOU

Answer 9

To The Love of My Life:

This first month together has been wonderful. It's been hard not seeing you everyday and it's hard not to think of you 24/7.  Your love is better than any love I've ever had in the past and it's just going to grow from here. I'm looking forward to another great month and Wednesday. :P

I LOVE YOU

Answer 10

To the love of my life,

     This first month together has been wonderful, its been hard not seeing you everyday and its hard not to think of you twenty-four seven. Your love is better than any love I'v ever had in the past,and its just going to grow from here. I'm looking forward to another great month and Wednesday :P

                                                   I LOVE YOU