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Today I would like to talk about my mother, who has had a very big influence on my life.

She was born in Arequipa , her father died when she only was ten years old, remaining with her mother, two sisters and a brother. When she finished high school, she decided to study nursing .At the age of 23 she fell in love with my father, they married and had three children including me. When I was five years old they divorced, leaving my brother , sister and myself under the guardianship of my mother.

I do not think that my mother has been the usual mother that one has, since her nursing duties were not allowing her spend a lot of time with us.

Besides being a single mother, she could progress without the help of a husband except the maintenance , she became an independent, determined, and practical person as regard to her home and to her children since if some problem was arising, she saw the means necessary to be able to solve it.

This is one of the ways that she influenced me, because I used to be alone at home the majority of time, so I had to see about my breakfast, wash my clothes, do the dishes, arrange my bedroom, clean and much more. It was in these years in which I became an independent person, thanks to her.

I have realized that one of the most important points, it has been the influence that she has had on me concerns the real life , she always wanted that I saw positive as negative aspects , she did not bring up me with a thought of perfect world, when she had the opportunity, she used to take me to hospitals where she was working, She was telling me the life of the patients, the reason of being hospitalized and much more.

It was very sad, to see especially, homeless children , children with serious diseases and without resources to finance operations, you really does not feel it until you see it.

I remember that she used to bring children of the ladies of the market to home, she was bathing them and was dressing them in clothes that already we did not wear.

despite we were not in a good economic situation, so It was a meaningful gesture from her

Finally, thanks to all the good and bad moments that I spent with her, I consider me as a helpful person .

Answer 1

Today I would like to talk about my mother, who has had a very big influence on my life.

She was born in Arequipa.*  Her father died when she only was ten years old, leaving* her mother, two sisters and a brother. When she finished high school, she decided to study nursing.  At the age of 23 she fell in love with my father, and so* they married and had three children,* including me.  When I was five years old they divorced, leaving my brother, my sister and myself under my mother's care*.

I do not think that my mother was able to be* the usual mother that most people have*, since her nursing duties did* not allow* her to* spend a much* time with us.

Besides being a single mother, she progressed* without the help of a husband except for* maintenance, so* she became an independent, determined and practical person in regards* to her home and to her children.  If any* problem arose*, she quickly* saw the means necessary to* solve it.

This is one of the ways that she influenced me, because I used to be alone at home the majority of time, so I had to see about my own* breakfast, wash my own clothes, do the dishes, arrange my bedroom, clean and much more.  Thanks to her,* I became an independent person during these years.

I have realized that one of the most important influence she has had on me is in her perspective in life*.  She always wanted me to see the positive as well as* negative aspects.  She did not raise me* with the belief in* perfect world, and when she had the opportunity, she took* me to the hospitals where she worked* and told me the life stories* of the patients, such as* their reason for being hospitalized.

It was especially sad to see the homeless children and children with serious diseases and without resources to finance their* operations.  You really do* not feel it until you see it.

I remember that she used to bring children of the ladies at* the market home, bathing them and dressing them in clothes our old clothes*, even in our bad economic situation.*  It was such* a meaningful gesture from her.

Thanks to all the good and bad moments that I spent with her, I have grown to be a better* person .

Very good job!  Keep up your studies!

Answer 2

Today I would like to talk about my mother. SHE has had a GREAT influence on my life. She was born in Arequipa. UNFORUNATLY, her father died when she only was ten years old. SHE WAS LEFT WITH HER MOM, 2 SISTERS, AND A BROTHER. When she finished high school, she decided to study nursing. At the age of 23 she fell in love with my father, they married and had three children including me. When I was five years old they divorced, leaving my brother, sister and myself under the guardianship of my mother.

I do not think that my mother has been the usual mother THAT SHE ONCE WAS, since her nursing duties were not allowing her spend a lot of time with us.

Besides being a single mother, she could progress without the help of a husband, EXCEPT WITH ONE THING, MAINTENCE. BECAUSE OF THIS, she became an independent, determined, and practical person REGARDING her home and her children.  IF some problem was arising, SHE HAD THE QUALITIES necessary to be able to solve it.

This is one of the ways that she influenced me, because I used to be alone at home, the majority of time,  I HAD TO MAKE  my OWN breakfast, wash my clothes, do the dishes, arrange my bedroom, clean and much more. It was WITHIN these years that I became an independent person, thanks to her.

One of the MORE important points ALTHOUGH, IS THAT it has been the influence that she has had on me THAT concerns the real life; she always wanted ME TO BE OPTIMISTIC. She did not bring ME UP with a thought of NEGATIVE world. When she had the opportunity, she used to take me to hospitals where she was working, she TOLD me the life of the patients, theIR reason FOR being hospitalized and much more.

It was very sad, ESPECIALLY, TO SEE homeless children , children with serious diseases THAT DID NOT HAVE resources to finance operations. YOU REALLY CANNOT FEEL THE SADDNESS, UNTIL YOU SEE IT.

I remember WHEN she used to bring children of the ladies of the market to home, SHE BATHED THEM and DRESSED them in clothes WE HAVE OUTGROWN.

Despite OUR POOR FINANCIAL SITUATION, MY MOM HELPED, It was a meaningful gesture from her.

Finally, I THANK HER FOR all the good and bad moments that I spent with her, I'D consider mYSELF as a helpful person .

Good job!

Nice vocabulary!

Answer 3

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