Who can translate something in hebrew?

Question

Its for a friend:

Shalom matok sheli (is this correct?),

i hope you arrived Dallas without any problems. I already miss you. Take good care of you. You are really important to me...

Answer 1

Here's my best attempt:

Shalom motek sheli.

(Motek= sweetheart. Matok = sweet)

Ani mikava she higatah b'Dallas b'li kasheh.

Ani k'var mitgageat otkha.

Tishmor tov b'atsm'kha.

Atah khashuv li b'emet.

(Assuming, of course, that it's a woman talking to a man!)