Who can we trust, when we can't trust ourselves?

Question

Touched

Turned

Moved

Burned

By another

In Love we trust

Others

To protect us

Correct us

Deflect us from

Harm to

Ourselves

We stumble

Trip

Wobble and

Fall

On our faces

Disgraces

In haste this

Heart bleeds

With needs

As it feeds

Off another

Both weakened

Diminished

Finished

In Love we trust

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Answer 1

you must trust yourself Hydropro.

your feet and hands need you.

im liking how you are writing your poem structure.

Answer 2

never trust anyone in this world. always be at alert. try to calculate and asses the others feelings. eliminate the waste and accept the reason. negotiate/practice yourself to stand erect in the crowd. enjoy the best part of the life.

Answer 3

That is why I pray.

(You need to block the pest.)

Answer 4

Always trust yourself FIRST!

(I don't know why, but my first thought in reading the first stanza was Johnsonville brats sizzling on the grill!)

Answer 5

My Feelings Precisely,

How sad That so few Words,

can sometimes say too much.

A Bond so strong can not be broken,

Only by the one who wishes

to break it.

Therefore There was no True Bond to begin with.

Just the Love of a Woman.

Answer 6

For me, your poem says How can we trust ourselves, when there is no one to trust out there ? Well put!

Answer 7

Wow, that poem really resonated with me. I have made that same mistake! I agree that we have to trust ourselves first. We ultimately walk through life like how we dream...alone. We have to be our own advocate and our own friend, we have to know we will be on our own side.

Answer 8

Well in GOD we trust And GOD trusts us to trust ourselves .               .All others Pay Cash