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Who wants to ride the peas train?

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Just Don’t Do It

Peas train

Pea brain people

With small minds

Fall behind

Leading us back

In black

Hole sun shine on

Us all big or small

As equals this prequel

To a solution

Your contribution

Is just fairness

I declare this

Notion

While on the ocean

Where we fish swim

Talk not about him

But his words

The word

It can be fun to

If we all can do unto

What we’d have done to

Ourselves

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  1. Mush ado about nothing.......but peas. And you mint every word of it.

    Thank we all our Pod! (Don't call him Shirley.)


  2. This sounds like a religious statement is underneath the surface of this piece.  We can't undo... be we can forgive ourselves for what we do; however we have to be sincere about it. If we can do things to make the world a better place then there is room for us here, in spite of past mistakes.  

  3. Excellent words by an excellent poet.  All the poets on this site AND

    their works are worthy of the highest respect.  Thanks, HP!

  4. wtf?

  5. OMG there IS someone left who THINKS and FEELS both at the same time!

    i like your wordplay

  6. I only have this to say:

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7sjSHazjr...

    and

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tXaZmY52g...

    P.S. Yes, we DO get the not-so-subliminal musical clues!  :-D

    .

  7. The words to this are nice. Good job. You amaze me, you have a way with words.  

  8. Don't dish the peas.. please..

    Sweet peas or snap peas..

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