Pls Pls Pls help, I really need to win this. Pls give me any comment.
Is this a good letter or is it rude? Thanks :o
To Whom It May Concern:
I am writing to you regarding the subject (x*x x*x x*x x*x x*x) I have been told I have to repeat. I disagree with the decision that the Examination committee has been made. Because I strongly believe that I took this subject seriously and have put a certain effort in it. I had a good record of attendance, I participated in every class activities and I handed in all of my assignments.
Firstly, all of the assignments in this subject set to be group work. x*x x*x is the only person in my group. At first we both did pretty well but about few weeks after the semester started, she kept missing out classes, I hardly see her in the college and I could not contact her at all. Therefore the first part of the project (Proposal) ended up in a rush and the work has finished badly. For the other project (Crosstrack), I knew I could not rely on her anymore and she was disappeared again so I decided not to contact her and did everything all the way alone and I finally manage to finish my project. In my opinion, this was a group assignment, most groups have three people or at least two people and I had to do it by myself, I think this is already unfair to a student.
Secondly, I became very ill during week 16 in semester one and I rarely come to class during that week. There had about 3 assignments due on Friday, 13th June. ‘Wine Label’ for x*x x*x, a ‘Written Report’ for x*x x*x and a ‘Crosstrack’ design for x*x x*x. For the wine label, I finished early so I dropped it into XXX’s Drop Box in the server around Wednesday, 11th June. For x*x and x*x assignments, I was unable to come to the college on the due date. So I came to the college on Monday, 16th June, I printed both of my assignments in color in the Resource Centre and after that I gave my assignments to x*x in the administration and signed two late work forms accompanied with the copy of my medical certificate. Unfortunately, the Crosstrack assignment is ridiculously missing.
Thirdly, I feel unfair of I was the one who have completed all the work but I have received a fail and x*x who did not come to class and did not complete anything and she receives a pass in this subject.
As a former law student, I have always believed that the world has justice and everyone should deserve what they deserved. I believe that I should deserve more than a pass in this subject, if I have to repeat this subject then I think I need to repeat all of my subjects. Because I had the same attitude in all of my subjects that I have done in semester one and I handed in all of my assignments for each subjects.
I am very disappointed with the college’s Late Work Submission system, how can they lose a student’s work, I think this is ridiculously wrong and it is the administration responsibility. This is a valuable lesson to me, now I understand how important it is to hand in my assignment directly to my lecturer and nobody accept myself could be trusted.
I hope that you could consider my appeal.
Thank you for your consideration.
Best regards,
x*x x*x
Student number: XXXXXX
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