Why Isn't Anyone Answering MY Questions?

Question

I usually get at least one answer but none.

Tell me whay you think of my poem please.

Let's run away...Just name a place

Where the air tastes like rain and the glowing night sky reflects on your face.

Lets capture the moments and leave the city lights behind.

The moment freezes in perfection as i wish upon a shooting star.

Your eyes are the stars and my heart is the sky, it just fits.

*Take my heart in your hands but be careful its fragile

Lets blend our hearts to echoe in harmony.

When the sun rises at night,thats when i'll take my heart back.

*I may remove this line

Just tell me what you think of it and please dont be rude.

Please write more then one sentence not one liners like "I hate it/I love it".

Answer 1

noone is really getting them answered. for some reason its stuck. If you hit reset sometimes you'll see the most recently asked questions. But all i'm getting is questions asked 13 hours ago. Its frozen.

Answer 2

It seems like it could be a really nice poem but i jus dont see where ur going with it becuz u mention running away with someone but yet taking ur heart back..hmmmm? but i do love the 'where the air tastes like rain and the glowing night sky reflects on ur face'...

Answer 3

Too many words in it. Compress it more- use less words to get there.. (I don't know anything about poetry, though, so that's just an opinion)

Answer 4

to tell you the truth i really don't like it.....you have the beginnings of something but its not quite there you should try to use more metaphors  but I'm not one to beat a poem with a hose so I'll leave it at that.

Answer 5

Answers has been down for several hours. This is the first new question I have seen.

Answer 6

Yahoo answers is having a bad day.  The questions have not been divided by category since midnight.

It's a pain!