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Why are two lips important?

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Ok, i did fall down

but i really dont think so,

you stood over me, and said

"Yes you did".

i said "no i didnt,

i just came down here

to see

what it was like to feel

a life rain down on me."

and with that i turned a tulip

and drank from its cup,

saw sunshine face with laughter

you said, "want up?"

"no my dear Steph, i like being a plant...

well OK i guess! i'm seeing all your Ants!!"

We laughed hard that day

it's one thing i remember

a drink from the tulips

and a smile looking up.

Ok, i still fall down,

purely as laughter,

but always get picked up

everytime after.

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  1. It's sweet!


  2. A great read, weird, but great!  I only felt two places that might be somewhat suspect to meter.  Nicely done, farmerman!

  3. OMG i really like it because it has dialog in it!  No matter what you change about it in th future, please dont change the title I LOVE THE TITLE

  4. I'm going to listen to you and drink from tulips from now on.

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