Why are u interested in working for american eagle and what are your career objectives? FEED BACK PLEASE!

Question

HERES my Answer:

I AM INTERESTED IN THE STYLE AND LOOK OF YOUR CLOTHES. AMERICAN EAGLE SEEMS LIKE A GREAT ENVIRONMENT TO WORK IN AND ALSO A GREAT ENVIRONMENT TO GAIN WORK AND VALUABLE LIFE EXPERIENCES. I WANT TO FURTHER ELABORATE MY PEOPLE SKILLS, WHILE ALSO OFERRING GREAT QUALITY SERVICE TO CUSTUMERS. IT’S MY CAREER GOAL TO PURSUE DENTISTRY.

Answer 1

That's a sure way to not get the job. It makes no sense. The first sentence looks like a kid wrote it, or someone who tried to make the sentence "sound" smart. You spelled "CUSTOMERS" wrong. And I don't think they care too much about what your career goal is. In the second sentence, you repeated 'GREAT ENVIRONMENT' twice. And I would leave out the whole life experience thing too.

hope that helps.

Answer 2

First of all, the corporate world doesn't really care if you like their uniforms or not. So cross that one out.

The people skills thing could work. Tell what YOU can do for their company. They really don't care what they can do for you. It's not about YOU anymore. Remember that.

I would also suggest that you use spellcheck and work in upper and lower case letters.

If you want to make a good impression, show that you have an education. They don't want dodo's working for them.

And if your career goal is dentistry WHY are you looking for a job in the airlines industry?

Your answer will get you into the round file.