Why cant someone give me a forward answer???

Question

The white walls are so small

They close my thoughts

As I think of suicide thoughts my innocents rots

Pierced by a hand not familiar to my own

I’m seating in a room with no walls

My thoughts are still at a roam

Death Language whispers bitter songs

The words are always symptoms to alone

Staring into space outside a window with no existence

This room is senseless

Being restless, I lay on the gritty floor

After a hit and another someone opens the door

deeper meaning then just suicide do you understand this or no?

Answer 1

your b***s are hanging out

Answer 2

Because I dont like judging most poetry. You should do it.

Answer 3

I take it that you are trying to convincingly express the fact that making yourself senseless with drugs only leads to suicidal tendencies and the drugs are not all that popular culture cracks them up to be.

Answer 4

I guess the person who wrote this is talking about depression, and maybe suicide. Also, maybe it's about loneliness.

Answer 5

you have too much time on your hands

Answer 6

The author is a bi-polar male, with ADHD.

I am not joking....

He is not on meds and life is no longer worth living....no matter what he does...it is never right...

His thoughts are constantly drawn to a place where he can rest.

Answer 7

I feel like the writer has a drug problem and its crack. I feel like author is tweeking or spacing out. conttiplating what is worse --suicide or addictio0n. Just reaching.

Answer 8

after a hit, and another someone opens the door........

makes me think someone is doing drugs..and there mind is wondering off because of this drug..

Answer 9

The wonderful thing about poetry is that it can be whatever the writer or reader imagines it to be.  

Part of the feel I get is that this is more of how the writer is viewing his or her existence.  Perhaps longing for something more, yet being unable to see anything beyond where he/she is. Wanting to break free from the room.  Yet unable to do so alone.

You definitely use some poweful imagery.  It's very easy to get lost inside the words.  Please keep writing.   I'd also encourage you to try your hand at free verse if you haven't.

Would love to read more.