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Why do we have to ask questions?*?

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"Dreaming of Blue Morning"

Was it ever hard

to let go?

Your radiance

captured me,

a brilliant comet

in a dark dark sky.

The implosion of a star

in my heart,

crystalline scintillations,

a new song

from lips

unused to melody.

And yet,

my hands

are not large enough

to hold the world.

Why do you let me

hold your heart?

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  1. Poetic descriptions speak of the ecstasy, (sparkling flashes and violent collapses) depicting joy and a heart letting go to chance being held in human hands? Beautiful.


  2. Letting you hold my heart

    The answer to your question

    I can see

    Even if you do not

    The strength you possess

    So please

    Accept my request

    And hold on to my heart

  3. The words and imagery within this poem are both charming and captivating.  "The implosion of a star/in my heart,/crystalline scintillations,..."  Beautiful.  I really like how you ended the poem with a question.  I don't know if it's funny, strange, or normal, but I found myself answering it :)  Fabulous as always.

  4. Very nice, probably in the minority but "crystalline scintillations" would not be choice for this line.  Overall, well done.

  5. Omg this is so wonderful. Kudos to you!! AWESOME job!

  6. The line implosion of a star in my heart is cross generational.  Lovely work as usual.

  7. The last line nailed me.

  8. Which question? The leader? The last question of your poem? I like poetry that ends in a question. It gives the reader something to reflect upon? Don't you?

  9. With you having this gentle touch that takes the reader to NO TIME NO PLACE, where only there, we don't have to ask questions. Beautiful !  

  10. a letting heart lives back the life it got,

    a weightless matter for worlds to carry.

    Of easy release the love lade ferry,

    never forgetting a true lovers knot.

  11. WOW!!!!!! this is so great!!!!!!! but did you wrote it??????

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