Why i want to further my education? help im desperate.?

Question

Why i want to further my education? help im desperate.?

will someone please help i need to win this contest and i don't know how to start off a well written essay.

so can you guys give me some examples of good intros or first sentence ideas .....please i would really appreciate ....ps...Im only 15 yrs old. these words need to be worth 2000 dollars really!!!please please........

Answer 1

I want to further my education because I'm desperate.  I am 15 years old and....

Answer 2

To me, education represents opportunity, a chance at personal growth, and ensuring that our next generation will be exponentially more self-sufficent than the last.

After that, then go into further detail on each of the three points. Explain why education represents opportunity to you. Explain why and how it will provide you with personal growth. Explain how your completion of a higher education will effect the next generation (your future children as well as the next generation in all of America would be good).

That's what I would do anyway. Good luck!