Why was wrong with the comment I said?

Question

This lady asked, why is your definition of a scary neighborhood?

I said.

" when drug addicts roam the streets, when little girls cant even play out in their front yard. When even the police are afraid to go into the neighborhood.

-when you cant trust your neighbors

-people are not friendly

-one man for himself type

-ghetto

-the children are as just as rude as the parents

-killing"

I got like 3 thumbs down for it.

Answer 1

I think it's a very good description of a scary neighbourhood.

Answer 2

I think you are too general and obvious. You have to explain your points, such as why can't you trust your neighbors.

Is it because you can hear screaming from their homes, telling you their family doesn't get along? This would make the neighborhood scary because the kids of these neighbors may get into serious drugs to coop with their problems and spread the stuff with other kids in the hood to create more family problems.

You get the point. Also don't use the word "like", it sounds immature. Use "for example" or "such as".    

Answer 3

i dint find nething wrong with ur statement..