Wie ist meinem deutsch?

Question

Hallo, mein name is alex, Ich liebe in Neu York, ich bin zwanzig jahre alt, ich lerne deutsch in frei zeit weil ich mag deutschland und der sprache. Ich spreche englisch, naturlich. es ist Schwierig sprache zu lernen. Was glauben Sie?

Answer 1

NOT SO BAD....  "HARD TO LEARN " ITS OUT OF SYNTAX

JETZT,  RICHTING......

HALLO, ICH HEISSE ALEX, ICH BIN AUS NEW YORK STÄDT, ICH BIN 2O JAHREN ALT, ICH MACHT DEUSTCHE IN FREI ZEIT WIEL INTERESSIER MICH DEUSTCHLAND UND DER SPRACHE. ICH KANN ENGLISCH, NATURLICH

"IST SCHWIERIG ZU ERLERNEN"

WAS MEINST SIE?

Answer 2

Good job Alex, I understood exactly what you were saying...the difference between the verb "to live" and "to love" is a difficult one for some reason....but I suggest you give that your highest priority...before some girl you meet takes offense....Also Germans  have a  more narrow interpretation of the word "love" than Americans, who use the word all over the place....be careful...Keep at it, Love ya lots, Paris....

Answer 3

Considering that you're self-taught, I think your German is pretty decent. The corrections above are good, and in general, you may want to reread the paragraphs about cases. But don't worry, the most important thing is that you use the language at any opportunity you get. Better make yourself understood and get the odd die und der mixed up than wait for ages until you've got it all sorted out and never talk.

Answer 4

Dein Deutsch ist ziemlich gut, but it's unnecessary to translate place names like "New York", as they will be understood anyway, and actually, the German translation is not used. You should, however, translate the names of the German federal states and major cities into their German equivalent, so "Northrine-Westfalia" will be "Nordrhein-Westfalen" and "Munich" will be "München". Wikipedia is a great help if you want to learn more about Germany.

Also, you used the correct formal adressing "Sie", and also used the verb correctly in "Was glauben Sie?" -- Third person plural, and "Sie" with a capital S, very good indeed! But, on the internet, the less formal "Du" is commonly used. You can write it with a capital D at the beginning (which I do), or with a lower-case d, that's up to your choice, and it goes with the 2nd person singular, so the phrase from above would be, "Was glaubst Du?"

I think you will cope with the German verb and adjective endings pretty soon. It's maybe not easy for you to learn a language where words keep changing their ending syllables, and everything has an unlogical gender, with a choice of three (male, female, and neutral). I think it's easier for a German tolearn English than the other way round; but if I learned English, you can learn German. Take this advice from my English teacher: "Don't be afraid to make mistakes! All kind of learning basically consists of making mistakes." ("Haben Sie keine Angst, Fehler zu machen! Lernen besteht im Prinzip daraus, Fehler zu machen.")

Answer 5

Would you like us to correct you?

Wie ist mein Deutsch?

Hallo, mein Name ist Alex. Ich lebe in New York und bin 20 Jahre alt. Ich lerne Deutsch in meiner Freizeit, weil ich Deutschland und die Sprache mag. Meine Muttersprache ist Englisch. Es ist schwierig, eine Sprache zu lernen. Was denken Sie?

Anyway, I think your German is pretty good. I'd give you a B-.

If you have any questions, feel free to ask.