Wiil you read my wedding vows, and tell me what you think?

Question

Here goes:

Meghan

For the rest of eternity I pledge to you my undying love, that you will never feel the rain for I will be your shelter, that you should never be cold, for I will be your warmth, that you will never be lost, for I will be your light. I give to you my entire self, to be caring, honest, unselfish, and patient; because that is what you are to me. You are my end and my beginning, so I give you this ring as a token of our perfect oneness. We dream of an incredible future, and side-by-side we will se it come true.

Answer 1

very touching! But can you really do it.

Answer 2

It's beautiful, so go for it!

Answer 3

i think it's really nice and heartfelt. i don't think i like "perfect oneness" no union will ever be perfect, and the word "oneness" sounds silly. maybe try this and see what you think, "so i give you this ring as a token of my promise." this was it have relevance to what you just said before it.

Answer 4

thumbs up

Answer 5

reading it made me wanna cry. it's so romantic..

Answer 6

i think it's really sweet but kind of cheesy

Answer 7

Very sweet...

Answer 8

thats so sweet DUDE your wedding night is going to be FUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

Answer 9

Fab.

Answer 10

wonderful! write them on a 3x5 card so you will have a back-up plan when or if nerves take over. Way cool idea, record your thoughts prior to wedding and use it wilth light background music. Have her do the same for her vows and both keep it a secret from each other.That way you will have the recording for a lifetime ... hmmm... that could be good and bad... good luck

Answer 11

Very sweet, but sounds very much like the Apache Blessing and isn't as poetic. You could use the Apache Blessing, or cut out the cliches to make it even better.

Answer 12

Oh, boo-hoo - very beautiful!!!! Nicely done.

(You might want to add a mention of fidelity or faithfulness (like, you won't stray..)