Will anyone please read this?

Question

Here is a quick true story that I wrote. Please review it on there or here. Thank you!

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2560892/1/Endings_are_new_beginnings

Answer 1

wow, that sounds a lot like my life. because i have social issues i usually blurt out things without speaking, ppl get angry at me, and laugh at me too, some ppl are just total jerks. im also overwieght and OCD. i also have adhd, so theres further 'reason' to laugh and jeer at me.

i think what u did was good. dont blow ur handle, just ignore them losers. a good way to blow off steam at them might be to have a diary, or, if ur a big internet person, a blog. u can use code names for the ppl that are mean to you, or something. if you need help, ill be here for you.

Answer 2

Well it's good to write down your feelings.As good literature-it's c**p.But don't let that put you off.If you want to write well you need to be taught.And I'm sorry you had a bad time at school.Hope the world is kinder to you.